Saturday, December 22, 2007

Best gift EVAR! XD

First off, a hearty THANK YOU to Desu for hosting--this was a relatively hassle-free PC, and I must say that I thought it was a great success! Your place allowed for lots of space, comfort, and animals galore! Definitely exceeded all my expectations! :D

Now, to the topic of the post...I really must commend Twill and Nyx for the story--what a fantastic surprise!! I was honestly super excited to start reading it, and that's exactly what I did as soon as I got home! Bar none, I think this is the most creative, thoughtful, and just plain cool gift I've ever received! :)

The writing's hilarious, and I think you've got some very good observations and mannerisms for each of our characters! There were so many brilliant, little moments, tiny snatches of detail that really got a reaction from me (usually a hearty lol). Let me list a few, for my enthusiasm's sake:

-what a bystander would've done in a typical action hero to assist a hero, but no, I don't know that because I "prefer alternative cinema"
-the audience at Scorpio's performance--men with monocles!
-all of Rubin's sections--the Cups thing was ridiculously funny, and the random organic chemistry!
-OB clinging, starving, and exclaiming, "Spray away!" with the perfume called "Come Hither" (can't think of a better perfume title to relate to her)
-Desu's comments when she's experimenting with the origami were great, and little peaks into her family's dynamics were wonderful (the hoarding books, for example--that is so like most parents!)
-Nyx thinking of mauling a nature photographer!
-Starwing being the supernatural one--totally the one most tuned in with the mystical!
-Melody's characterization was spot on (especially the "Just kidding!")
-Kris's very random encounter and story with the rolling dude--so random and borderline absurd, perfect!
-Twill's gushing enthusiasm for superheroes, and Greek things!
-Cross's weird habits--checking in on her salad was genius!

And as a note--NO, I didn't know a lot of people in high school!! :P But yes, random people do comment on my name, haha.

Twill, I hope it wasn't modesty that prevented you from having your own glorious origins section! I was really looking forward to when you develop / discover your own powers, especially as the primary writer of the story! I'm glad Bei got fantastic segments, as co-creator and helper. :)

Can't say enough great things about this. Thanks for the laugh--it was all very heartwarming!

2 comments:

Duke Rubin said...

ZOMG! I KNOW!!! I concour with Natrix on all points.... ALL!

Thanks to Desu again, for hosting. It was glorious with kick-ass views and animals galore (I still love the Great Pyrennes dogs that you have... oh how huge they are).

And OMG! I read the whole thing late last night in one sitting because it was so gloriously good! I really, really, REALLY ejoyed the little nuances of all our characters... My section was down to a T, as I would be cursing organic chemistry with all my heart AND I would be oggling hot guys left, right and centre.

I just a ginormous laugh out of Natrix's "alternative cinema" comment and Nyx mauling a nature photographer.

And OMG... I had no idea that Ms Cross "checked on her salad".... really????, but I have heard and experienced her random teeth brushing. And yes, working some of our old Churchill teachers into the story was pure genius (OMG Mr. SAGAN!!!! *DIES*).

Such a wonderful gift, Twill... such a wonderful gift indeed... I can't thank you enough for such an original and awesome gift... and I can't bloody wait for part II!!!! CAN'T BLOODY WAIT!!!!

Twill said...

:D

I'm glad you liked it so much. It was my goal to get a lot of little details in, for little laughs and moments where you feel all knowledgeable and stuff. I'm glad my efforts turned out well :)

And as for my own missing origin story -- it was mostly a time thing. I did a fair portion of the writing and formating in the two days before PC. I had to cut it short a little bit, and rather than cut someone else out, I decided to cut myself (because I know I wouldn't feel bad about it XD). It'll definitely come up in part II, though, I promise.

And I'm not too sure what else to say other than thank you for all the great comments and I'm so happy you guys have enjoyed it! :D